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Faithful Yet Abused Puppy by ~Demonrain2424:iconDemonrain2424:



I'm sitting here,
Alone again.
Because of you.

I'm crying here.
Why can't you see?
Why don't you care?

I'm sitting here.
I'm crying here.
Because you don't care.
You never cared.

I see that now.
As I'm sitting here.
As I'm crying here....

But out of nowhere,
I hear your voice,
As you whisper,
"I'm sorry."

But the words you say,
The words you thought,
Would make things better,
Only make the tears worse....

And as I'm sitting here,
As I'm crying here,
I wonder who made you do it.
Was it her?

It had to have been.
Because now I know,
That I was nothing more to you,
Then a pet.

You never loved me.
Never.
You never cared.
Not one bit.

But silly me,
Silly puppy.
"You were stupid,
Stupid enough to believe,
That a wag of your tail,
Would change everything.

And silly enough to trust him.
After the first blow,
You should have ran,
And never came back.

But you forgave him.
Because you're forgiving.
And now look.
He's killing you again.

Each blow hitting deeper.
Each blow hurting you more.
But you always came back,
You dumb dog.
Always...."

And that's what I was,
What I still am.
An abused yet faithful puppy.

And as I'm sitting here.
As I'm crying here.
I realize suddenly....

That I'm dieing here.
©2008-2009 ~Demonrain2424
:icondemonrain2424:

Author's Comments

poem i wrote at school today.

not that good, i know.

the puppy is me, btw.

oh and if you can think of a title, please let me know.

I edited because I spelled stuff wrong. ';P

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:iconzachwimberly:
deep but i like it :D

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"...as if something was broken in the world and we were supposed to hold our palms against the wound"-Donald Miller
:iconzimalien:
;_______; I'm so going to feature this in my journal. This poem made my heart sink, then floated back up.

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moved.
:icondawnpaw:
Oh my God...
This poem is amazing. ;-;
So sad, though... :heart:

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:noes:
Amazing icon by Jahzz:heart:
:icondemonrain2424:
Thanks. And it really hit how I feel. Even though it is not really a poem. well kinda... but whatever.
:iconakeliya:
awww.... i feel so sad.... when did this happen? Something similar to this happened to me just yesterday, and because like you, I forgave, it happened today too..

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{TaMaKi}
:icongemma-the-dragon:
aww that's a very sad poem...touched me deep ^_^ but it's a great one :clap:
you could call it Forgive me or something like that

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xxgxx :heart:
:iconphantomwolf:
Nicely done. :hug:

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